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Spencer
  • If no one does, society would be uncaring and valueless.
  • If no one did does, society would be uncaring and valueless.
  • does - present tense, would be - past tense
did, would be
Amari
  • From the viewpoint of psychology, ..." After a long-windedness, the expert asked: "By the way, under what circumstance, you saw her angry face?" "Well, I saw her when she was yelling outside the window."
  • From the viewpoint of psychology, ..." After having lectured the man for a while, the expert asked: "By the way, under which circumstances did you see her angry face?" "Well, I saw her when she was yelling outside the window."
  • "a long-windedness" is not commonly used, I put something that would make more sense :) ("After having lectured the man for a while")
lectured the man for a while

May 29, 2017 12:01 Public Marriage Counselling
Amari
  • After asking many questions, the expert still hadn't found out the problem.
  • After asking many questions, the expert still hadn't figured out the problem.
  • You can say "found the" (not "found out the"). Even better is "figured out the" :)
figured ou

May 29, 2017 12:00 Public Marriage Counselling
pigmat
  • If someone wants to quit, will be threatened to disclose their privacy to the public, even send directly to their home.
  • If someone wants to quit, they will be threatened with disclosure of to disclose their privacy to the public, even send sent directly to their home.
be threatened with

May 22, 2017 17:01 Public Have you ever heard of the ...
firstiron85
  • I brought a red carnation to her.
  • I brought a red carnation for her.
  • Using "for" makes it clear it was a gift. If you say "to" her, it sounds like you simply placed the carnation and your mother near to each other :-) It would be even more natural to say "I brought her a red carnation".
for 和to的区别

May 15, 2017 15:28 Public Today, my family went to th...
tony
  • A few days ago, I decided to rejuvenate it.
  • A few days ago, I decided to revive it.
  • revive -- bring something back to life, bring someone back to consciousness after they have fainted rejuvenate -- make something younger and more active
revive

May 13, 2017 11:59 Public The rebirth of my old laptop
臭豆腐
  • I'll split tomorrow's load to the two days after, therefore 150 push-ups, 150 sit-ups, and 150 deep squats for each day.
  • I'll split tomorrow's load acrtoss the next two days after, therefore 150 push-ups, 150 sit-ups, and 150 deep squats for each day.
the next two days

May 12, 2017 08:26 Public A follow up to my 3UP challenge
tony
  • On the contrary, French writing forms are so complicated, the words have so many different mute letters.
  • In contrast, French written forms are very complicated; the words have so many different silent letters. [Alternative: French spelling is very complicated]
  • "On the contrary ..." is used only when you are saying that the last thing which was said is false.
on the contrary 暗示之前的观点是错误的
Kevin
  • For 30 days, you finish 100 push-ups, 100 sit-ups, and 100 deep squats in 30 minutes each day.
  • For 30 days, you completefinish 100 push-ups, 100 sit-ups, and 100 deep squats in 30 minutes each day.
  • For goals, like a large number of tasks, it is better to use "complete", most of the time.
complete goals

May 8, 2017 20:48 Public The 3UP Challenge
臭豆腐
  • (Not anymore, it requires every teacher speaks in Standard Mandarin in school now.) I mastered Standard Mandarin by watching television, listening to the radio, and reading self-study materials until maybe the last year of my high school.
  • (Not anymore, it is (now) requireds that every teacher speaks in Standard Mandarin in school (now).) I mastered Standard Mandarin by watching television, listening to the radio, and reading self-study materials until maybe [the last year of my high school / my last year of high school].
  • "The last year of my high school" sounds like your high school ceased to exist after that year.
my last year of high school

May 7, 2017 23:08 Public My mother tongue

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