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Hi!.
I'm into music, movies, and art. I also like backpacking. I have been to Europe and the U.S and several Asian countries.
I haven't practiced English enough. Someday I'd like to become fluent in English.
For now, I'm trying to devote as much time as I can.
I think we're never too old to learn something new.

Could you please correct my sentences so that they sound natural?
I don't worry about each small thing. I want to study while having fun.
Let's help each other!

I sometimes write on the blog after you corrected.
https://medium.com/@rumim_en

こんにちは!
私は音楽、映画、アート、 バックパック旅行が好きです。 これまでヨーロッパとアメリカといくつかのアジアの国へ行きました。
しかし私には英語の練習が足りていません。 いつか流暢に英語を話せるようになりたいです。今のところできるだけ多くの時間を費やそうとしています。私たちは何か新しいことを学ぶには年を取りすぎているってことはないと思うのです。
自然に聞こえるよう文章を修正してくれませんか。細かなことは気にせず、 楽しく勉強したいと思っています。
お互いに助け合いましょう。よろしくね。

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Ancestors With native lang

I drew about my ancestors. I heard that one of my ancestor invented a texture for stockings. Another ancestor was a potter after he retir...
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An Amateur’s Exhibition With native lang

I held an exhibition with some members of art class for three days. Each families and friends came to a small gallery. I somehow felt lik...
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Nov 25, 2018 21:36
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Lady Bird

I’ve same experience with Lady Bird. I went to an expensive university even though I can’t find my any talent. What’s more, I was drunk w...
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Nov 25, 2018 18:33
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Seven-Five-Three With native lang

Compared to another day it’s quiet in the city. I just passed by people who going to go Shichi-go-san. Shichi-go-san is celebrate for th...
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Nov 17, 2018 18:29
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Bohemian Rhapsody With native lang

This film start with Brian May plays a song of 20th Century Fox intro. There’re a lot of masterpiece songs that everybody knows. I just w...
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