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Lindsey
  • This phenomenon brings some troubles in both areas.
  • This phenomenon brings some troubles for both areas.
  • You could also say "to both areas." "Bring" implies movement, so that is why "in" does not make sense. It might be better to say, "This phenomenon can cause problems in both areas."

Jan 7, 2014 21:25 Public My English Essay Practice (5)
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  • However, email has become very important channel to communicate, modern people just cannot simply stop using them.
  • However, e-mail has become a very important channel of communication, modern people just cannot simply stop using it.

Jan 2, 2014 17:43 Public My 2nd English Essay
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  • There are statics shows that average users spending fifteen minutes to deleting spam mails daily.
  • There are statistics showing that average users devote fifteen minutes to deleting spam mails daily.

Jan 2, 2014 17:42 Public My 2nd English Essay
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  • However, these new technologies causes more troubles in certain extent.
  • However, these new technologies causes more trouble, to a certain extent.

Jan 2, 2014 17:41 Public My 2nd English Essay
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  • New updates can be set to be done while the machine is not used.
  • New updates can be set to be done while the machine is not in use.

Jan 2, 2014 17:40 Public My 2nd English Essay
Heather
  • It has been slow down the development of the old cities where it had been a capital of a country for more than centuries.
  • It has been slowed down the development of the old cities where it had been a capital of a country for more than centuries.
  • what is the "it" you are talking about here? The sentence is vague

Jan 2, 2014 14:38 Public My essay practice
Heather
  • The first idea of how tourism benefits to development is doing more research on heritage and its surrounded areas.
  • The first idea of how tourism provides a benefits to development is doing more research on heritage and its surrounded areas.
  • Not sure what you mean by "surrounded areas" as heritage is not a place.

Jan 2, 2014 14:38 Public My essay practice
Heather
  • Furthermore, preserving the area where the heritages also slows down to grow local towns because it is banned to build new buildings.
  • Furthermore, preserving the area where the with heritages also slows down the growth of local towns because it is banned to build new buildings building new buildings is banned.

Jan 2, 2014 14:37 Public My essay practice

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