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Jul 2, 2017 05:14 GriffinGNeal made 16 corrections for 2 little paragraphs
Excellent work!
Jul 1, 2017 17:56 ethan.100 made 12 corrections for only 2 paragraphs
Jul 1, 2017 16:47 노을 made 13 corrections for only 2 small paragraphs
May 28, 2017 12:24 Eli made 8 corrections for A REAL ARTIST
May 24, 2017 11:33 Carlos commented on MY POOR MANCHESTER
I didn’t know that you had already lived in that beautiful English city. Every homicidal attempt against innocent people is an action tha...
May 24, 2017 08:57 Arrotino made 1 corrections for MY POOR MANCHESTER
So che abitavi a Manchester. È un reato fatto da una mente malata.
May 8, 2017 19:39 Maegi made 9 corrections for Because Death
Apr 24, 2017 04:14 Austin commented on Liberté, égalité, fraternité
Hope the French people don't drop the ball on this, like UK and US
Apr 14, 2017 21:20 Jan made 42 corrections for WISE UP, ALESSANDRO!
Very nice story !
Apr 14, 2017 17:37 Aria commented on WISE UP, ALESSANDRO!
Che peccato che non è scritto nella Tua lingua madre. Sembra che sia molto interessante.
Mar 30, 2017 22:53 Carlos commented on oh Love, whose farts
I totally agree amico, that also works in the opposite direction though. That is, our beautiful little women also have to endure one or a...
Mar 29, 2017 00:42 Arrotino made 6 corrections for oh Love, whose farts
In poetry, just about everything is permissibile. Having said that, I'll be trying to forget what I've just read. I'm jok...
Mar 12, 2017 00:56 Carlos commented on Dirty dog, human alone
Well my friend, I think that here people don't know to appreciate your canine analogies, with what happens to persons with sensitivit...
Dec 9, 2016 15:37 France commented on Statues should have beards
?? déjanté ??
Nov 12, 2016 12:36 Debie made 13 corrections for MADISON
Nov 11, 2016 13:13 Debie made 14 corrections for MADISON
Yes, there is a Madison, WI. I've been there. It is nice, but very cold in the winter. Yes there is a lake, and yes, it is icy. It...
Sep 24, 2016 04:05 Tessybear made 1 corrections for SOMETIMES
Sep 14, 2016 16:33 Marissa made 3 corrections for BECAUSE
It was very hard to correct anything on here, it's a very good poem. I really appreciated it as a wavering poet,myself.
Sep 14, 2016 13:21 Viji commented on BECAUSE
Hello my friend! Its been a longtime since you wrote. How are things in Italy now? I am really sorry the quake had to happen. So much pa...
Aug 4, 2016 14:12 sognatrice made 30 corrections for MADISON
Nice, nice! Keep it coming!
Aug 4, 2016 13:42 pietimer made 28 corrections for MADISON
I'm from Madison, WI. It truly does exist and really is a great place!
Aug 3, 2016 14:11 sognatrice made 18 corrections for MY LIFE LIKE A WELL
That's deep. You're very good! I'm hesitant to say that any of your sentences are simply wrong because it's like a poe...
Aug 1, 2016 02:37 sognatrice made 60 corrections for MORGANTOWN
You are a natural storyteller! So was it that you left Morgantown to let go of your past, instead of being consumed by the past embodied ...
Jul 31, 2016 20:47 Arrotino made 76 corrections for MORGANTOWN
Wow! What a great piece! Un sipario è sceso, ma un altro sta per alzare; nuovi amici e nuove avventure ti aspettano. Non ho che ammir...
Jul 31, 2016 18:48 Flo made 1 corrections for MORGANTOWN
Le rideau est tombé... les acteurs sont fatigués... Un autre spectacle va commencer. Un spectacle de vérité? Lo spero per te, caro a...
Jul 29, 2016 10:24 sognatrice made 35 corrections for PHRASES PHRASES
This is better than TV!
Jul 29, 2016 10:14 sognatrice made 22 corrections for PHRASES
I like it! Keep it coming.
Jul 27, 2016 08:56 sognatrice made 19 corrections for SENTENCES SENTENCES SENTENCES!
Nice. NICE
Jul 26, 2016 10:19 Arrotino made 23 corrections for SENTENCES SENTENCES SENTENCES!
You have some interesting sentences ;) Great work!
Jul 24, 2016 01:13 sognatrice made 40 corrections for A MADE UP STORY FOR LEARNIN...
Interesting. You dropped eggs at the grocery store, so you were taken to some secret place to be judged by "Bob Dylan," then yo...
Jul 24, 2016 00:40 sognatrice made 8 corrections for NEW SENTENCE 2
Interesting. I'm not sure what's going on tho. Keep going!
Jul 20, 2016 10:54 MightgyG made 13 corrections for NEW SENTENCES
Jul 18, 2016 08:36 Arrotino made 10 corrections for SENTENCES 3
Great! I gave a few alternatives.
Jul 18, 2016 03:21 Arrotino made 16 corrections for SENTENCES 2
Excellent!
Jul 18, 2016 02:49 draco made 19 corrections for SENTENCES 3
Well done!
Jul 14, 2016 08:21 Arrotino made 11 corrections for SENTENCES
Excellent! Non sei affatto arrugginito.
Jun 23, 2016 13:38 Viji made 5 corrections for LOVE AND OTHER PATHOLOGIES
Interesting article!
Jun 21, 2016 18:47 Viji made 7 corrections for GOSPEL
Well done Alessandro!
Jun 13, 2016 05:35 Flo commented on HI EVERYBODY!
:))) Spero che troverai! Io, ho trovato! Ciao Alexandre!
Jun 8, 2016 09:00 Carlos commented on MUHAMMAD ALI.
Yes my friend, unfortunately the greatest is gone. He floated like a butterfly and stung like a killer bee. U.U
Jun 5, 2016 16:54 meraustaad made 2 corrections for MUHAMMAD ALI.
Jun 1, 2016 09:17 Arrotino made 47 corrections for BALLAD FOR MICHEL
Fabulous! Apart from lie/lay there was not much that needed to be changed.
May 30, 2016 20:50 Flo commented on BALLAD FOR MICHEL
Alessandro, I know it's not your fault... :-) (cultures différentes) Per me è bellissima.
May 25, 2016 00:25 Arrotino made 10 corrections for GIOVANNI FALCONE / an inter...
Nearly perfect. La mia traduzione della sua risposta sarebbe "only a spirit of service" ma la tua va anche benissimo.
May 25, 2016 00:04 Arrotino made 36 corrections for GIOVANNI FALCONE
Excellent! Infatti, mi ricordo queste vicende. Erano uomini valorosi.
May 23, 2016 13:15 Viji made 11 corrections for NEDDA
All the corrections except for "resides" are just "my interpretations" or "my take"! Is this a continuati...
May 21, 2016 21:55 Viji made 14 corrections for FOR MY FRIEND FLORIANA
May 18, 2016 09:39 Arrotino made 39 corrections for COMMENCEMENT
Complimenti! This was great! Most of my changes were punctuation. Yes, you're right: you'll remember this as long as you live.
May 9, 2016 10:20 Carlos commented on A FABLE
Molto bravo amico!!! Your fable is very nice and enjoyable. I think that wandering oak tree has done a dirty trick to our little friend. ...
May 8, 2016 13:46 Viji made 4 corrections for A FABLE