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Oct 10, 2017 16:06 Jack made 16 corrections for A BRIEF REPORT
Sep 28, 2017 14:01 LKRR made 16 corrections for SCARS XXVIII
Sep 28, 2017 13:58 LKRR made 8 corrections for SCARS XXII
Very good point :)
Sep 28, 2017 13:54 LKRR made 33 corrections for BIKE RIDING PRINCE [not one...
Sep 19, 2017 19:26 Aria commented on SCARS XXVIII
Sembra molto interessante. Purtroppo non capisco l'inglese.Che peccato che non scrivi questo anche in italiano.
Sep 17, 2017 13:20 toaskjdfl made 16 corrections for SCARS XXIII
There are quite a few things in here that are non-standard grammar if you were just talking, but since it's a poem, I mostly assumed ...
Sep 14, 2017 09:51 Arrotino commented on SCARS IX
I wouldn't change anything.
Sep 14, 2017 09:49 Arrotino made 9 corrections for SCARS VII
Sep 14, 2017 09:46 Arrotino made 1 corrections for SCARS VI
Great! I changed the order of one sentence; otherwise, it's fine.
Sep 14, 2017 09:43 Arrotino made 1 corrections for SCARS V
It's fine just as you've written it. I wouldn't change anything.
Sep 12, 2017 12:05 teresa commented on THE ROAD TRIP AND OTHER SCARS
>>One day she left from the South >>At the end of the month he left for the South. >>he was where there the girl live...
Sep 8, 2017 07:52 Arrotino made 51 corrections for THE ROAD TRIP AND OTHER SCA...
Excellent work! My changes were all very minor.
Sep 7, 2017 07:08 Arrotino made 50 corrections for THE ROAD TRIP AND OTHER SCARS
Very good! I'll read the other parts over the next few days.
Sep 2, 2017 03:35 Krishna made 7 corrections for SCARS XVI
Sep 1, 2017 23:59 Willy commented on SCARS XIX
As a poem it works, the metaphors have a dissonance quality that is quite striking. "Torn Ripped Stone" is an obvious metaphor ...
Sep 1, 2017 13:11 kevin314 made 8 corrections for SCARS XVII
Aug 26, 2017 10:47 fufu made 8 corrections for SCARS VIII
Hi there, I hope my correction is useful for you :) I’m sure you would do the same for me, too. This is why Lang-8 is so good! It allows ...
Aug 26, 2017 09:04 سكايلر made 9 corrections for SCARS VIII
Aug 23, 2017 18:58 tim.daly.923 made 9 corrections for SCARS IV
Aug 23, 2017 18:57 tim.daly.923 made 9 corrections for SCARS III
Aug 23, 2017 18:56 tim.daly.923 made 9 corrections for SCARS II
Aug 23, 2017 18:55 tim.daly.923 made 9 corrections for SCARS I
Aug 5, 2017 06:09 vdixoch made 13 corrections for little paragraph for my work
Jul 9, 2017 10:57 emmab27 made 43 corrections for UGLY GIRLS AND OTHER STORIES
Jul 2, 2017 23:22 Danielle made 12 corrections for ITALY`S MALAISE
Jul 2, 2017 05:14 GriffinGNeal made 16 corrections for 2 little paragraphs
Excellent work!
Jul 1, 2017 17:56 ethan.100 made 12 corrections for only 2 paragraphs
Jul 1, 2017 16:47 노을 made 13 corrections for only 2 small paragraphs
May 28, 2017 12:24 Eli made 8 corrections for A REAL ARTIST
May 24, 2017 11:33 Carlos commented on MY POOR MANCHESTER
I didn’t know that you had already lived in that beautiful English city. Every homicidal attempt against innocent people is an action tha...
May 24, 2017 08:57 Arrotino made 1 corrections for MY POOR MANCHESTER
So che abitavi a Manchester. È un reato fatto da una mente malata.
May 8, 2017 19:39 Maegi made 9 corrections for Because Death
Apr 24, 2017 04:14 Austin commented on Liberté, égalité, fraternité
Hope the French people don't drop the ball on this, like UK and US
Apr 14, 2017 21:20 Jan made 42 corrections for WISE UP, ALESSANDRO!
Very nice story !
Apr 14, 2017 17:37 Aria commented on WISE UP, ALESSANDRO!
Che peccato che non è scritto nella Tua lingua madre. Sembra che sia molto interessante.
Mar 30, 2017 22:53 Carlos commented on oh Love, whose farts
I totally agree amico, that also works in the opposite direction though. That is, our beautiful little women also have to endure one or a...
Mar 29, 2017 00:42 Arrotino made 6 corrections for oh Love, whose farts
In poetry, just about everything is permissibile. Having said that, I'll be trying to forget what I've just read. I'm jok...
Mar 12, 2017 00:56 Carlos commented on Dirty dog, human alone
Well my friend, I think that here people don't know to appreciate your canine analogies, with what happens to persons with sensitivit...
Dec 9, 2016 15:37 France commented on Statues should have beards
?? déjanté ??
Nov 12, 2016 12:36 Debie made 13 corrections for MADISON
Nov 11, 2016 13:13 Debie made 14 corrections for MADISON
Yes, there is a Madison, WI. I've been there. It is nice, but very cold in the winter. Yes there is a lake, and yes, it is icy. It...
Sep 24, 2016 04:05 Tessybear made 1 corrections for SOMETIMES
Sep 14, 2016 16:33 Marissa made 3 corrections for BECAUSE
It was very hard to correct anything on here, it's a very good poem. I really appreciated it as a wavering poet,myself.
Sep 14, 2016 13:21 Viji commented on BECAUSE
Hello my friend! Its been a longtime since you wrote. How are things in Italy now? I am really sorry the quake had to happen. So much pa...
Aug 4, 2016 14:12 sognatrice made 30 corrections for MADISON
Nice, nice! Keep it coming!
Aug 4, 2016 13:42 pietimer made 28 corrections for MADISON
I'm from Madison, WI. It truly does exist and really is a great place!
Aug 3, 2016 14:11 sognatrice made 18 corrections for MY LIFE LIKE A WELL
That's deep. You're very good! I'm hesitant to say that any of your sentences are simply wrong because it's like a poe...
Aug 1, 2016 02:37 sognatrice made 60 corrections for MORGANTOWN
You are a natural storyteller! So was it that you left Morgantown to let go of your past, instead of being consumed by the past embodied ...
Jul 31, 2016 20:47 Arrotino made 76 corrections for MORGANTOWN
Wow! What a great piece! Un sipario è sceso, ma un altro sta per alzare; nuovi amici e nuove avventure ti aspettano. Non ho che ammir...
Jul 31, 2016 18:48 Flo made 1 corrections for MORGANTOWN
Le rideau est tombé... les acteurs sont fatigués... Un autre spectacle va commencer. Un spectacle de vérité? Lo spero per te, caro a...