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Jun 1, 2014 00:50
Secondly, local merchants probably have benefits from improving transportation. Actually, people are likely building new restaurants or grocery stores around a station. A new station must produce good results for local merchants. For example, my neighborhood has progressed urban planning. Atlantic Barcley Center which was built 1 years ago produced good benefits. Building the big entertainment hall, governments decided to improve public transportation so the number of trains and bus are added. Many people became to use the station more often, so the local merchants have progressed too. There are many bars and restaurants around there because many people come here regularly. Therefore, it is obviously good for local merchants.
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