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  • Last but not least, video games can be a trigger to learn or polish up a foreign language.
  • Last but not least, video games can spurbe usa triggers to learn or {polish/brush up} a foreign language.
  • "Trigger" has a negative connotation, while "spur" tends to have a positive one. Examples: Fame is the spur which motivates many people to succeed. The sight of the man who killed her sister was the trigger that resulted in her mental breakdown.

Apr 10, 2019 13:34 Public TPO writing 30(2)
George
  • What's more, in human society, when a person donates its organs to strangers, it will receive appreciation and compliment from both the individual and the society, such non-material remedy is also a reward, and could be more valuable.
  • What's more, in human society, when a person donates its organs to strangers, he or she will receive appreciation and compliments from both the individual and the society. These act as non-material rewards, and could be more valuable.

Mar 2, 2019 17:40 Public TPO writing 13
Sarah
  • After all, the generation gap could always create conflicts between family members and when you're not with your parents, you totally avoid them.
  • After all, the generation gap could always create conflicts between family members leading to more family disputes and purposeful avoidance.
purposeful avoidance 故意回避

Mar 2, 2019 17:39 Public TPO writing 14(2)
Sedgehead
  • However, most Chinese are still stubborn about this, parents still force their children to get married before 30 at most times, if they couldn't find a mate the parents will arrange match-dating for these poor youth.
  • However, even today, most Chinese are still stubborn about this. Parents will still usually force their children to get married before they reach the age of 30. If they don't find a mate their parents will arrange dates for these poor youths.
youth要用复数。
Sedgehead
  • I firmly believe marriage is a person's own business, parents should never interfere it, like making arranged marriage in ancient China, which caused many tragedies about love.
  • I firmly believe the decision to marry or not marry is a personal decisions. Parents should never interfere with it. Arranged marriages in ancient China caused many tragedies and considerable heartache related to love.
xiaojin
哦,可以這樣寫:“I was so captivated by her that like a servant, I followed her every order."

May 10, 2013 10:43 Public A girl used to like me - Part5
George
  • I'm kinda of full at the moment to be honest.
  • I'm kind of full at the moment to be honest.
  • "kinda" is short for "kind of" so you can not use "kinda of" since it would mean "kind of of"

May 7, 2013 23:52 Public A girl used to like me - Part5
George
  • After finishing having the supper, I'm continuing to write this one-sided story.
  • After finishing having the supper, I'm continuing to write this one-sided story.
  • OR : (more formal) After having finished supper ... OR : (less formal) After supper ...

May 7, 2013 23:52 Public A girl used to like me - Part5
Sedgehead
If a young woman came to my motel room, closed the door, took off her shoes, and jumped on my bed, I'd say she had ideas... and wanted to do a few other things that you might imagine might happen next! In fact, one time, I wrote a fict...
force one's way in是强行闯入的意思,force one's way是挤,冲,强行,强迫的意思

May 7, 2013 13:30 Public A girl used to like me - Part4
Jazz
  • It was a cool talk, guess she had more feelings on me through this process, yet I still didn't find it out by then.
  • It was a cool talk, guess she had more feelings for me through this process, yet I still didn't find it out by then.
have feelings for sb,对某人有感觉(指好感)

May 7, 2013 11:31 Public A girl used to like me - Part2

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