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Jan 24, 2020 17:28
Question
Some people say that the number of cars in cities should be limited. Do you agree with this idea?

My answer
I think that the number of cars in cities should be limited.
I have two reasons.
First of all, global warming is serious problem now. If the number of cars in cities reduce, that will help to prevent global warming.
Also, almost people who live in cities can live without cars by using trains or buses. For example, there are a lot of convenience stores, bus stops and train stations in cities.
Because of all the reasons above, I think that we should limit the number of cars in cities.