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Dec 10, 2019 12:01
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(Some people say that shoppers are influenced by advertisements too easily. What do you think about that?)

I do not think that shoppers are influenced by advertisements too easily for two reasons.
First of all, today, almost stores in japan cannot get a lot of benefits because people do not buy things much there.If advertisements have influence, people should spend a lot of money by those.
Also, some people don't see advertisements a lot.
For example, young people don't care about things except their favorite things.
Because of all the reasons above, I think that shoppers are not influenced by advertisements too easily.