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(Q: advantages of advertising.)There is no doubt that advertising has a lot of advantages, both for the society, the company, or the individual. For society, it is a creative industry that employs many people, without advertising there would be higher unemployment. For a company, their products could be spread by the advertising at an astonishing speed. For the people, advertising is a form of modern art, which could increase people's joy.(Thank you!!For ILETS, Mark Schemeshttp://www.examenglish.com/IELTS/IELTS_Writing_MarkSchemes.html)
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For a company, their products could be spread by the advertising at an astonishing speed.For a company, their products could be recognised quickly through advertising.
their products could be spread by the advertising at an astonishing speed. - this sound unnatural to me so I revised it as above, but maybe there are better way of saying it. I hope other lang-8 peeps give their suggestions too.