（Q: advantages of advertising.）There is no doubt that advertising h...

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Mar 8, 2017 15:54
（Q: advantages of advertising.）There is no doubt that advertising has a lot of advantages, both for the society, the company, or the individual. For society, it is a creative industry that employs many people, without advertising there would be higher unemployment. For a company, their products could be spread by the advertising at an astonishing speed. For the people, advertising is a form of modern art, which could increase people's joy.（Thank you!!For ILETS, Mark Schemeshttp://www.examenglish.com/IELTS/IELTS_Writing_MarkSchemes.html）
goyf
Mar 8, 2017 20:19
  • （Q: advantages of advertising.）There is no doubt that advertising has a lot of advantages, both for the society, the company, or the individual.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • For society, it is a creative industry that employs many people, without advertising there would be higher unemployment.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • For a company, their products could be spread by the advertising at an astonishing speed.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • For the people, advertising is a form of modern art, which could increase people's joy.（Thank you!!For ILETS, Mark Schemeshttp://www.examenglish.com/IELTS/IELTS_Writing_MarkSchemes.html）
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
Randy
Mar 9, 2017 20:20
  • For a company, their products could be spread by the advertising at an astonishing speed.

  • For a company, their products could be spread by the advertising at an astonishing speed.For a company, their products could be recognised quickly through advertising.

    their products could be spread by the advertising at an astonishing speed. - this sound unnatural to me so I revised it as above, but maybe there are better way of saying it. I hope other lang-8 peeps give their suggestions too.

 
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