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Chapter 11: Hidden Resentment

Chapter 11: Hidden Resentment author: Rizwan Ahmed Memon The next day, Aman Wadi once again didn’t join us at the dining table. To k...
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Dec 6, 2018 16:08
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Commentary (Draft 7)

Commentary (Draft 7) Eight years passed. Timkey finally received her degree in gynecology and obstetrics. Like Azeem, she follo...
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Oct 15, 2018 14:38
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Commentary (Draft 1)

Commentary (Draft 1) Author: Rizwan Ahmed Memon Eight years passed. Timkey finally received her degree in gynecology and obste...
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Oct 5, 2018 13:16
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About the Author NEW VERSION (2)

About the Author NEW VERSION (2) “Every time has some happiness and some sorrow. One has to find life amidst happiness and sorrow.”—Ri...
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Sep 29, 2018 16:54
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Dream Scene (Draft 3)

Dream Scene (Draft 3) Author: Rizwan Ahmed Memon I was uneasy with remorse and, in my desperation to find forgiveness, my mind and he...
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