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Sep 21, 2018 01:06 Tones made 6 corrections for These days, I talk with my ...
Sep 20, 2018 21:29 z0えy made 7 corrections for I took two classes today.
頑張ってください
Sep 20, 2018 18:19 Kat made 14 corrections for I took two classes today.
Good luck!
Sep 19, 2018 02:57 Sam made 9 corrections for I went to eat lunch with on...
Nice entry! I hope it works out!
Sep 18, 2018 22:45 acriter made 10 corrections for Very strong typhoon came to...
Sep 18, 2018 10:55 sjstrauss made 10 corrections for Typhoon left from Hong Kong.
Sep 18, 2018 10:31 sjstrauss made 11 corrections for Yesterday, I went shopping ...
Sep 16, 2018 10:21 sjstrauss commented on Yesterday, I joined a hotpo...
In contrast with the other correction, I actually don't see anything odd or offensive about mentioning that Taiwanese people were the...
Sep 15, 2018 11:25 Aeon Akechi made 7 corrections for Yesterday, I joined a hotpo...
Sep 14, 2018 12:44 Tones made 8 corrections for Today, I invited two Taiwan...
Sep 14, 2018 01:00 朋也 made 4 corrections for Today, I invited two Taiwan...
Sep 13, 2018 01:25 Tones made 15 corrections for Wednesday is the most busy ...
Sep 12, 2018 06:13 Eeiko made 8 corrections for I made three friends today.
Sep 11, 2018 23:37 Sam made 11 corrections for I made three friends today.
Great entry! I hope you become good friends!
Sep 11, 2018 23:34 Puresthera made 9 corrections for I made three friends today.
Sep 11, 2018 23:34 Jallyy made 11 corrections for I made three friends today.
いいね!
Sep 11, 2018 08:33 xMichaelx made 3 corrections for Today, I went to PrizeMart,...
Sep 11, 2018 07:47 sjstrauss made 4 corrections for Today, I went to PrizeMart,...
Sep 11, 2018 00:53 zech made 7 corrections for Today, I went to PrizeMart,...
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Sep 10, 2018 07:34 sjstrauss made 3 corrections for There was no plan today, so...
Sep 9, 2018 22:45 redtree24 made 8 corrections for There was no plan today, so...
Sep 9, 2018 18:01 redtree24 made 10 corrections for Yesterday, I participated i...
Sep 8, 2018 13:21 artboy598 made 10 corrections for Yesterday, I participated i...
Sep 7, 2018 11:57 tony made 5 corrections for I went to kebab restaurant ...
Sep 6, 2018 08:29 sjstrauss made 3 corrections for I made some friends in the ...
Sep 6, 2018 06:25 Tangram made 4 corrections for I made some friends in the ...
'A' is a really hard word to get right! Very good work in general!
Sep 5, 2018 02:34 Sam made 11 corrections for Today, I took two classes.
Great Entry! Written very well!!
Sep 4, 2018 21:00 z0えy made 11 corrections for I want to enumerate what I ...
Wow!
Sep 3, 2018 12:32 Yogian made 12 corrections for Yesterday, I moved a tempor...
Sep 3, 2018 08:51 sjstrauss made 10 corrections for Today, I went to central ag...
Good luck in classes! :)
Sep 3, 2018 01:22 Oscar made 13 corrections for Today, I went to central ag...
頑張ってください!
Sep 3, 2018 01:18 Oscar made 12 corrections for Yesterday, I moved a tempor...
Sounds exciting :D
Sep 1, 2018 03:14 tony made 11 corrections for Today, I participated in we...
Aug 31, 2018 13:40 Rina made 6 corrections for Today was busy day.
Aug 30, 2018 05:16 Joms made 6 corrections for I came to Hong Kong to stud...
良く出来ました。頑張って下さい。
Aug 30, 2018 01:19 Jallyy made 2 corrections for I went to participate in an...
私が日本語で話す練習をすると、私も緊張します。 頑張って!
Aug 29, 2018 17:47 z0えy made 7 corrections for I went shopping for daily n...
Aug 29, 2018 07:35 sjstrauss made 5 corrections for I came to Hong Kong to stud...
Good luck! :)
Aug 29, 2018 05:03 Sam made 7 corrections for I came to Hong Kong to stud...
Good luck! The English is looking great so far!
Aug 29, 2018 04:21 Sam made 8 corrections for I went shopping for daily n...
Great entry! Your English looks great!
Aug 16, 2018 23:34 bennatan made 8 corrections for This is a passage about thi...
Jul 1, 2018 10:00 last_naive made 3 corrections for 我回日本了!
Jul 1, 2018 02:54 len - れん - 蓮 made 6 corrections for I’m going on a trip to Nanj...
You are having a very interesting time.
Jun 30, 2018 22:47 JohnD made 2 corrections for The evening, the day before...
Jun 30, 2018 22:39 JohnD made 4 corrections for One of my Chinese friends c...
Jun 30, 2018 20:39 len - れん - 蓮 made 14 corrections for Yesterday, I went on a trip...
Sounds like a very interesting day.
Jun 30, 2018 17:51 Moby made 14 corrections for The evening, the day before...
Jun 30, 2018 17:41 Moby made 13 corrections for One of my Chinese friends c...
Jun 28, 2018 09:08 Aoe made 5 corrections for I supposed to meet and eat ...
Jun 26, 2018 16:40 lenubis made 6 corrections for 我最喜欢的季节是夏天。
根据以上理由:これはとても固い書き言葉なんです。小論文なら特に問題ないですが、この文章に使うとかなり違和感を覚えます。シンプルに「所以」を使う方が自然だと思います。