Instigating Things. Again

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Nov 1, 2016 18:43
A government instigated an invasion into a neighbor country. As a result, some of the territory has been occupied and taken. The citizens of the aggressive party are enjoying a proud isolation by most of the world and praising their leader.
usaxelo_momxmarebeli
Nov 2, 2016 15:59
  • Instigating Things. Again
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  • A government instigated an invasion into a neighbor country.

  • A government instigated an invasion into a neighboring country.

 
  • As a result, some of the territory has been occupied and taken.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • The citizens of the aggressive party are enjoying a proud isolation by most of the world and praising their leader.
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Nov 2, 2016 16:32 cornhunter
  • Спасибо!
    Судя по вашим записям, Вы тоже отлично продвинулись в изучении русского.
Syrian iceberg
Nov 10, 2016 22:22
  • A government instigated an invasion into a neighbor country.

  • A government invaded a neighboring country and occupied some of its territory. The aggressors are very proud of themselves and praise their leader, but they're also shunned by most of the world.

 
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A government instigated an invasion into a neighbor country. As a result, some of the territory has been occupied and taken. The citizens of the aggressive party are enjoying a proud isolation by most of the world and praising their leader.


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