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Jan 21, 2017 22:28
I have an entrance exam of an university.
I need to write a small essay for it and I want to practice here.
Please correct my essay!

The question is " Do you think Japanese people should eat Japanese food more or not?"

My answer↓↓

I think Japanese people should eat Japanese food more, because we should tell next genelation Japanese tradition. Japanese food is not only special food but also it should be home made food. We should eat it always as common food in order to tell children how great tradition. Also Japanese food is good for our health, because it consist of a lot of vegetables , beans and fish. Japanese food has low fat. Therefore I think Japanese people should eat Japanese food more.