Yesterday, I was talking with my friend.

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Oct 23, 2019 22:56
Yesterday, I was talking with my friend. He has to do a duty everyday; but most times he forgets to do it. I recommended him to make a reminder on his smart phone. This way he can do it easily without making busy his brain with remembering everything. He replied: "I am a chaotic person so I can not do all things as a tidy way." I said: "so how can you manage your daily tasks like doing sport, going to appointments and so on?" He responded: "Only by luck". What an incredible, funny sentence!
Rebeka
Oct 24, 2019 12:21
  • Yesterday, I was talking with my friend.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
  • He has to do a duty everyday; but most times he forgets to do it.

  • He has to do a duty everyday, but most of the time he forgets to do it.

 
  • I recommended him to make a reminder on his smart phone.

  • I recommended he set a reminder on his smart phone.

 
  • This way he can do it easily without making busy his brain with remembering everything.

  • This way he can do it easily without having to remember everything.

    Or closer to the original "without his busy mind having to remember everything."

 
  • He replied: "I am a chaotic person so I can not do all things as a tidy way." I said: "so how can you manage your daily tasks like doing sport, going to appointments and so on?" He responded: "Only by luck".

  • He replied: "I am a chaotic person so I can not do all things in a tidy way." I said: "so how can you manage your daily tasks like doing sports, going to appointments, and so on?" He responded: "only by luck".

    colon (:) is okay, comma (,) is more common.

 
  • What an incredible, funny sentence!
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
 
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Yesterday, I was talking with my friend. He has to do a duty everyday; but most times he forgets to do it. I recommended him to make a reminder on his smart phone. This way he can do it easily without making busy his brain with remembering everything. He replied: "I am a chaotic person so I can not d


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