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David
  • He became an excellent guide dog and a blind man took him from the training center as a user.
  • He became an excellent guide dog and soon after started to serve as one for a blind man.

Mar 1, 2019 07:47 Public A Guide Dog Quill partⅡ
David
  • And gradually he is getting weak because of aging.
  • As he [got / became] older, he gradually [got / became] weaker.
  • You could also say, "He gradually became weaker as he [aged / got older]."

Mar 1, 2019 07:39 Public A Guide Dog Quill partⅡ
David
  • When he was 12 years old he died because of leukemia.
  • When he was 12 years old, he [died / passed away] [(as a result) of / from / due to] leukemia.
  • 'as a result' is optional here. You could also say, "He [died / passed away] [(as a result) of / from / due to] leukemia when he was 12 years old."

Mar 1, 2019 07:36 Public A Guide Dog Quill partⅡ
David
  • Then puppy walkers decided to adopt him and spent with him.
  • Consequently, the puppy walkers decided to adopt him and spend their time with him during his remaining days.

Mar 1, 2019 07:36 Public A Guide Dog Quill partⅡ

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